Please post your poem to be reviewed here. You MUST include your period with your First Name and Last Initial.
Each poem should include the following:
1.Include the Definition of the type of poem you chose.
2.List the devices you used to ensure your poem met the defined requirements.
3.Write you poem.
4.Your name, Period
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NIEGHBORHOOD LYRICS
ReplyDeleteI WRITE RHYMES THAT MEAN SOMETHIN
EVEN IF ITS NUTHIN TO YOU IT MEANS SOMETHIN TO ME
LET ME EXPLAIN SOMETHIN TO YOU
I CALL IT NEIGHBORHOOD LYRICS
AND HOMEBOY I BREATH IT AND SPEAK IT
OUR LIFE AS A YOUTH NEVER LIKING THE RULES
FOO'S WOULD LIKE ME TO LOSE CUZ I AINT FOLLOWIN THE RULES
ITS NOT WHAT IT SEEMS BEHIND THE SCENES
IM A GOOD KID WITH GOOD INTENSIONS
EVEN THOUGH I LEAVE BAD IMPRESSIONS
I CALL IT NEIGHBORHOOD L-Y-R-I-C-S
NICK G.
SONNET,a sonnet is a 14 line poem, with a ryeme scheme. i used 14 lines with a repeating patren.
ReplyDeleteIam not quite sure how to write a sonnet
so i will start with a few lines
if i corretly write this sonnet
all of it should rhyme
it was not to quiet
that you shouldnt here a pin drop
you can blame that riot
i suppose i wil just mop
so i began to ponder
my glorious days of old,
to which i wonder
if are even the old enough to have grown mold
and this is what i though
the day i was caught
ADRIAN VALDEZ!!!
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ODE, a ode is something u care about or somthing inportant to you. iam going to write at my BED!!
ReplyDeletemy bed, my bed
its a great bed
a soft loving bed
its been threw hell and back
its been jumped on
slept on
net yet collapsed
it has seen better day
pillows and covers thrown all over it
yet still my bed
what a wonderful bed
ADRIAN VALDEZ!!!!!!!
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FREEVERSE POEM,a poem that u can write anything about.
ReplyDeletelife,life,life
life with hidden serects
hidden memories
of enoyment
and sadness
life is a mystery that we all live
a serect
we will never learn about
we will never get
LIFE!
ADRIAN VALDEZ!!!!!
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free-veres doesn not follow regular rhyme sceme or meter devises used are rhyme
ReplyDeletemy father has been a hard working man threw his life all do he had few years in shool he has achieved alot inthis country
my father is very insperational to me because hes like a leader triyng to lead us threw these difficult times
my father works hard these days to maintain me and my family
my father......
alex perez per 1-3
MY DREAM CAR
ReplyDeleteMY DREAM CAR IS BETTER THEN YOURS
MY DREAM CAR IS FASTER AND SHINYER THEN YOURS
MY DREAM CAR IS A LAMBORGINI HAHA!!!